July 16th, 2009
Conclusions~Group 4
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Group 4: Che’Na, Maxie, & Tynisha
Post your two conclusions below by Saturday 5:00 pm. Comment on your group members’ conclusions by Sunday 5:00 pm.
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on July 16th, 2009 at 2:12 pm
Conclusion #1:
Where would I be if it wasn’t for education? What would I be doing right now if I wasn’t in college writing this paper? I refuse to ask myself these questions. The past can never be relieved; the only thing I can do is look forward. My future is in a crystal ball, yet no one will ever see it until it comes. No one wants to know what would have happened if I didn’t have this chance. Now, the question in everyone’s mind, including mine, is; Where will she go from here?
Conclusion #2:
“I think, therefore I am,” Rene’ Descartes once said. I believe in my mind, body, and soul that I can and will be successful. No matter what obstacles are thrown in my path, I will to the best of my ability overcome them. You are only given one life to live, and it is yours to do whatever it is you want to do with it. Growing up was tough, yet my rigid life has made me into the person I am today. The young woman you see before you will one day become the woman whom everybody looks up to. Her success story will forever live on.
on July 17th, 2009 at 10:58 am
Tynisha said,
on July 17th, 2009 at 10:57 am
Tynisha Wyman
Conclusion #1
Where does a man fit into a woman’s life? How does a woman succeed on her own? Why is being independent important? A man fits in a woman’s life if he wants to. You can’t make a man stay that doesn’t want to be there. A woman would be hurting herself if she even tried. A woman succeeds by realizing that she doesn’t need anybody for anything. She should be confident enough in herself to know that she can make it on her own. Not having that confidence in yourself would just make you depend on others. Independence is important because you have to find out your strengths on your own. You have to be able to know what you want and do it for yourself. I am independent, and nobody can change me or tell me what I can’t do. I learned my independence throughout my whole life. Watching my mother as I grew up taught me to do for myself. Independence is the number one key to success, and I’m on the right path.
Conclusion #2
Imagine opening your eyes to what was supposed to be two parents was only one. Although I was very young I still felt the pain of not having a father around. I still missed him like any child would, but I couldn’t let his absence in my life stop me from achieving my goals. I will forever go on until I feel as though those goals are met. I am still strong and will continue to be for as long as I live. I will not let anybody or anything stop me from being me or come between what I believe in. I am who I am because of who and what I believe in. I believe in my mother and I believe that independence is the key to success.
p.s, the people who are commenting the ending in both are somewhat the same because i want that in which ever one you thinks is best.
on July 17th, 2009 at 11:02 am
Che’na
I think both are your conclusions are good. They are boh really interesting. My favorite one is the second one. I think you should use that one in your essay…That’s just my opinion.
Good Job!!!!
on July 19th, 2009 at 11:21 am
Tynisha Wyman
Conclusion #1
Where does a man fit into a woman’s life? How does a woman succeed on her own? Why is being independent important? A man fits in a woman’s life if he wants to. You can’t make a man stay that doesn’t want to be there. A woman would be hurting herself if she even tried. A woman succeeds by realizing that she doesn’t need anybody for anything. She should be confident enough in herself to know that she can make it on her own. Not having that confidence in yourself would just make you depend on others. Independence is important because you have to find out your strengths on your own. You have to be able to know what you want and do it for yourself. I am independent, and nobody can change me or tell me what I can’t do. I learned my independence throughout my whole life. Watching my mother as I grew up taught me to do for myself. Independence is the number one key to success, and I’m on the right path.
Conclusion #2
Imagine opening your eyes to what was supposed to be two parents was only one. Although I was very young I still felt the pain of not having a father around. I still missed him like any child would, but I couldn’t let his absence in my life stop me from achieving my goals. I will forever go on until I feel as though those goals are met. I am still strong and will continue to be for as long as I live. I will not let anybody or anything stop me from being me or come between what I believe in. I am who I am because of who and what I believe in. I believe in my mother and I believe that independence is the key to success.
p.s, the people who are commenting the ending in both are somewhat the same because i want that in which ever one you thinks is best.
on July 19th, 2009 at 8:19 pm
As Frank A. Clark said, “If you can find a path with no obstacles, it probably doesn’t lead anywhere.” Thankfully, I have been traversing a path on which I stumble upon many obstacles. If Frank Clark’s Statement is true, then I’m heading somewhere. Where exactly I’m not sure, but with my ability to transform negative obstacles into a positive outcome, I will not be heading towards negative.
Imagine death in the same category as success. In which the two are extremely different, but rest in the same story. After my best friend Sal was shot to death and my second father died from a bran tumor, I have learned transform these experience from death to success.
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