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My wave.. The day I tried to live…

April 1st, 2007 by stk34623

Rarely

is there a day

like today

when i beg to get away
when i can smell the flowers outside
and the dreary clouds have no effect on my mood
when i can sit
and watch the clouds lower on the field
so gracefully surrenduring

i wish i was with you

away from this place

where sunshine is more than a sight

it becomes a feeling

this damp air
makes my eyelids heavy
yearning for something more

won’t the rain just come… ?

2 Responses to “My wave.. The day I tried to live…”

  1. on 10 Apr 2007 at 1:51 pm1 stk34644

    Very cool poem. It reminds me of a collection of Pink Floyd songs rolled into a poem, (some songs from Dark Side of the Moon, “Wish You Were Here̶ ;) Really cool stuff.

  2. on 10 Apr 2007 at 6:16 pm2 stk34623

    Thanks! It’s a little different from my usual poetry, but, eh, figured I’d try something new! (Love Pink Floyd, by the way!)

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